I do not think that young people in Japan are sufficiently interested in politics. The percentage of them who vote is low, and they do not seem to care much about political issues.
First, in Japan, (X significantly→ a significantly) lower percentage of young people vote in elections. This low voter turnout shows that young people either do not care enough about politics or simply do not feel like their voice will make a difference.
Moreover, some young people in Japan do not follow political news or understand how government decisions affect their lives. This lack of awareness makes it difficult for them
to actively participate in politics and suggests
that their general interest in political issues is (X low→ relatively low).
For the reasons mentioned above, I think that young people in Japan do not care as much about politics as they should.
内容：3/4 指定points Demonstrations / Social media を使えばよかったかな
構成：4/4
文法：4/4
語彙：3/4
(今後注意すればいいと思うこと）
１． 英語は同じ単語や表現を繰り返し使うのを嫌う言語ですから、そういう点にも気を使うといいと思います。
２. 意見表明（断定しすぎない）
X) 減点されやすい
Young people do not care about politics.
They are not interested in politics.
O)減点されにくい
Young people tend not to be sufficiently engaged in politics.
Many young people appear to show limited interest in political issues.
It seems that young people are less engaged than expected.
＊ tend / appear / seem は安全語
X)Their interest is low.
O)Their level of interest remains limited.
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