英検準1級の検定試験に向けて独学で勉強しているものです。英語に詳しい方、お手数おかけいたしますがWritingの添削をお願いしたいです。内容 構成 文法 語彙それぞれ4点、16点満点で評価して下さい追伸：AI採点を利用すればいいという器の小さい方の意見はご遠慮いただきます。TOPICAre young people in Japan sufficiently interested in politics?POINTS●Demonstrations●Social media ●Elections●Political awareness I think that young people in Japan are sufficiently interested in politics. They take part in various political activities, such as demonstrations, andalso exchange opinions about politics on social media.The first reason is that young people in Japan areincreasingly taking part in protests and social movements to voice their opinions on political issues such as climate change and human rights.This shows that they are politically engaged andwant to bring about change in society.The second reason is that young people in Japan actively discuss political topics on social media platforms such as X and TikTok. They share theiropinions and ideas on important issues, which makes it clear that they are interested in politics and trying to educate themselves.In conclusion, I do not think that young people inJapan need to be more interested in politics.

I think that young people in Japan are sufficiently

interested in politics. They take part in various

political activities, such as demonstrations, and

also exchange opinions about politics on social

media.



The first reason is that young people in Japan are

increasingly taking part in protests and social

movements to voice their opinions on political issues such as climate change and human rights.

This shows that they are politically engaged and

want to bring about change in society.



The second reason is that young people in Japan

actively discuss political topics on social media

platforms such as X and TikTok. They share their

opinions and ideas on important issues, which (X makes it clear→ clearly shows) that they are interested in politics and (X trying→ are trying) to educate themselves.



In conclusion, I do not think that young people in

Japan need to (X be→ become) more interested in politics.



4つポイントが提示されている場合、2つに絞って深い解答を心掛けましょう。多く使っても点数が上がることはないし、むしろ、内容が散漫になる可能性があります。



内容 4 / 4

構成 4 / 4

文法 ３/４

単語 3 / 4 ある意味キーポイントなのですが、準1級としてはもう一段の抽象語彙（口語→学術的）が求められます。

interested in politics→ politically conscious

take part in demonstrations → engage in political discourse

educate themselves → enhance their political literacy



*全体的によく出来ています。準1級用の単語をもう少し使いこなせレば、ずっとよくなります。リアクションプッシュお願いね。